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Madison Buszano: https://madisonbuszano.wixsite.com/my-site/post/do-i-really-need-to-become-a-reflective-practitioner
I loved reading your blog! Your writing was well structured, concise and it read with clarity. Your description was insightful and provided me with a clear understanding of a reflective practitioner. Your use of evidence towards the benefits of a reflective practitioner positioned me to understand the importance and value it holds for both the teacher, student and classroom environment. However, I cannot agree with your stance as you haven't clearly articulated the driving question, "Do I really need to become a reflective practitioner?" Although I can see the positive connotations of a reflective practitioner in your work, implying your stance on the question, I encourage you to more explicitly outline how you feel about the driving question. The use of images and/or photos might also aid to support your argument and writing. Overall, your blog was well detailed and provided an engaging and in-depth explanation of a reflective practitioner, its benefits, and the models to use to effectively become one.
I really enjoyed reading your blog! It was concise and contained both videos and images that beautifully complimented your writing. I feel your blog gaged with all aspects of Gibbs' Reflective Cycle. However, I suggest providing more depth in your writing, as I feel you had the opportunity to delve deeper into the strengths and limitations of becoming a reflective practitioner. You touched on the strengths, stating how reflection allows you to "constantly improve." However, I would consider the limitations of constant reflection and how that may impact an individual. I encourage you to continue stating your opinion, as it provides clarity and understanding for the reader. In this case, the importance of becoming a reflective practitioner. Having said this, I believe you could use more opinionated words to epitomise your answer to the driving question, for example, "I strongly believe" or "my firm stance is." Overall, your blog was engaging, eye-catching and well written.
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